marcus_pfeiffer's profile
AGE:
42
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 19
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 19
I’m a 4-times-published novelist and poet by a leading literary imprint.
I’ve heard one or two good things so I thought I’d try out Urbis by asking for feedback on these first drafts of two short poems ; the blue jays and swan.
I am not certain they are completely finished, sonically or rhythmically but they are close. My publishers - to whom these copyrights belong - have given me permission me to put these online.
So, fellow writers and poets – in advance,
Thank you.
m pfeiffer.
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Patrician swan, In holy diamond clothing, Cleaving water lake disdainfully ; I am not worth his notice. Angels, speak to my swan for me, That one day he will raise That white and silvered piping, To make his clarion call, And tell my time has come.
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Patrician swan, In holy diamond clothing, Cleaving water lake disdainfully ; I am not worth his notice. Angels, speak to my swan for me, That one day he will raise That white and silvered piping, To make his clarion call, And tell my time has come.
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Patrician swan, In holy diamond clothing, Cleaving water lake disdainfully ; I am not worth his notice. Angels, speak to my swan for me, That one day he will raise That white and silvered piping, To make his clarion call, And tell my time has come.
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Patrician swan, In holy diamond clothing, Cleaving water lake disdainfully ; I am not worth his notice. Angels, speak to my swan for me, That one day he will raise That white and silvered piping, To make his clarion call, And tell my time has come.
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Patrician swan, In holy diamond clothing, Cleaving water lake disdainfully ; I am not worth his notice. Angels, speak to my swan for me, That one day he will raise That white and silvered piping, To make his clarion call, And tell my time has come.
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I was very moved ; although I can think of one or two improvements, this work is very good. I do hope your boy's psyche can mitigate/ heal and that both of your lives improve. You are courageous, and courage is rarer than gold. Apologies but due to a bereavement I am unable to review in more detail at present. In time I hope to do that. Pfeiffer.
good work. Apologies but due to a bereavement I am unable to review in detail at present. In time I hope to do that. Pfeiffer.
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