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AGE: 17
LOC: New Haven, CT
GEN: Female
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A slow walk. . . consists of those, successive , subtle shifts of the weight, the nuance in the lines, the delicate arcs of the waist, the contours of the legs, causing the body and hips to swing to the right. . . and then to the left, in a soft but deliberate movement the eyes should fall directly, on the curve of the shoulder and the slenderness of the neck as the axis of the shoulders moves in the opposite direction, to that of the hips. The arm rises gently at first hangs suspended in air...
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Short Story / My First Pride
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I loved the piece overall, the descriptions were beautiful and captivating. My only problem is that I didn't understand the title at all, I don't know how it connects to the story. The definition of halogen somewhere in the beginning seems unnecessary. The ending left me with a sense of foreboding, kind of a wistful way to end the story. I liked it very much
Novel Treatments / For Corners
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