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AGE: 32
LOC: Carlsbad, NM
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 08

Hey all… I’m just a girl about town, trying to make a name for myself, doing what I love.

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Young Adult / Lavender Moon
Version 1
4 Reviews   3 Comments
Chapter Three   I was in awe! My mom… wow this was getting so real. I felt as if I were chasing some sort of ghost though. Why the games? Why couldn’t I just go where I need to be and see her? This was agony. I opened the rest of the packet and found a Colorado ID, some extra money and a key on a chain. I kept the list out, put the key around my neck and stuffed the rest of the packet in my sling. I stepped back inside to catch the light, it was already dark and the sky wa...
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Young Adult / Lavender Moon
Version 1
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Chapter Two     I had a lot of trouble sleeping that night, I did nothing but writhe around in my bed. Some were nightmares, others were different… serene. It was nice. I woke to someone coming through my door. I already knew who it was, Ed. I felt this cringing pang of nausea come on. I tried franticly looking for something to grab before he came near me. I swear I would bash his brains out. “Crap” I almost said it too loud. Thank god I was still covered, all of...
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Young Adult / Lavender Moon
Version 1
5 Reviews   2 Comments
Chapter One     I was 12 years old when I felt as if something were different about me. I couldn’t escape the memories.... oh my god the memories, I wanted to be someone else, someone else’s daughter, friend, companion. I often had many dreams... dreams that were shattered the day I had to let go, and toss all those memories away. He knew I was different….I knew I was different. For a long time I kept trying to figure out how I would get myself out of this mess...
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Horror / Nikki the Wraith - Chapter 4
by RavenJake
seriously i hope your planning on going all the way!!!!!! I would love to pick up a published copy of this book. Love Love Love it
Horror / Nikki the Wraith - Chapter 3
by RavenJake
all i could really see were some small tweeking to it. Ive read this one before and its just as great as the first time. I cant wait to read more. keep up the good work
Novel Treatments / Angélique City
by dcyuelling
~Is it captivating? ( the first is hard to get into, then towards the end spot on!!!) ~Does it catch your interest? ( same as the first question) ~What did you find interesting about it? ( towards the end was great, would like to read more) ~Do you think I can build a strong story with just this to start? ( the begining i think, and remember this is just one critiqe to the next it could use a little more work. I know how hard it is to start off on your first chapter) ~What do you think about ...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Untitled - All things start somewhere
by Jeannine
There sure are alot of abbreviated words in here. Kind of makes the story hard to read. I get into it then I come across another abreviation and I lose intrest. The story seemed to jump from the half dead girl to Abryn. Who is Abryn and how is he significant to the story? It just seems kind of weird. Hope this review is ok. Other than that good read
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Advanced State-of-the-Art IP PBX Phone System Technology
by luckychan
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