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AGE: 16
LOC: Slidell, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 18

Hey =] I’m a sixteen year old girl who just found out mission in life is to enlighten other people through writing. It all satrted with my love of books. After I read Everything Is Illuminated, I was talking to my friend Zach about how amazing everything about that book was. I loved how the author made me feel something. I loved how I experenced something through fictional plots and I felt as if I had learned something about myself. “Isn’t it a wonderful thing Zach,” I said to him, “Wouldn’t it be wonderful to touch people everyday by pure imagination?”

And so that’s when I knew, that’s what I have to do. So I’ve been working on it ever since. I write down every little idea and sentence that comes into my head. And I want to share the…

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Quotes / Six Word Memoir
Version 1
6 Reviews   0 Comments
How could it not be you?
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Love Is
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love is plane tickets midnight phone calls chocolate icing always being sorry blue blankets school id's robot t-shirts too stupid to see the signs capturing your attention for a week rotting houses short stories talking sea turtles sunflower fields blackberry-sage tea tree houses index cards raptor hunting eskimo kisses acoustical gray sweaters less than three beautifully sad magic carpet rides telling me to shut up with the apologies more plane tickets.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Love Is
Version 2
2 Reviews   0 Comments
love is plane tickets midnight phone calls chocolate icing always being sorry blue blankets school id's robot t-shirts too stupid to see the signs capturing your attention for a week rotting houses short stories talking sea turtles sunflower feilds blackberry-sage tea tree houses index cards raptor hunting eskomo kisses acoustical gray sweaters less than three beautifully sad magic carpet rides telling me to shut up with the apologies more plane tickets.
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Short Story / Naming The Stars
Version 2
5 Reviews   0 Comments
The loneliness of a small six year old girl ended with a single brilliant idea. Elliot snuck through her bedroom window one night to climb the maple tree that stood alone in her backyard. Looking up at the stars, Elliot was struck by how incomplete the big sky made her feel, and she knew that the something that would make her whole was tucked away in the universe. So she devised a plan to find the missing element. She looked around at her possessions, would they be enough? She began to gather...
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Short Story / Naming The Stars
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The loneliness of a small six year old girl ended with a single brilliant idea. Elliot snuck through her bedroom window one night to climb the maple tree that stood alone in her backyard. Looking up at the stars, Elliot was struck by how incomplete the big sky made her feel, and she knew that the something that would make her whole was tucked away in the universe. So she devised a plan to find the missing element. She looked around at her possessions, would they be enough? She began to gather...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Clan Prologue
by CloClo
Writing as I go: sorry if I'm disorganized: the first line and the rest of the paragraph condradict themselves. Maybe say there was darkness except for... You're going for something little kids often dream about in the 2nd paragraph, which you did well at by giving us something not cliched to add to our beautiful thoughts of Mother Nature. ("spending her time dancing within the confinements of the stars.") I think you are describing the pains a writer feels by not having an emotional outlet w...
Lyrics / "YOU TOLD ME THAT YOU LOVED ME"
by cooljim102055
Kay. I have to say that the title was so cliched I was compelled to see if anything else had any new ideas: hate to be the one to say it, but you did you told an old story the same as we've all heard it before. Don't get me wrong here: it's not a horrible story to tell, as we all can connect, but we want to hear it in a diffrent way. Have you ever heard of A Fine Frenzy? I don't know if you'd like them or not: but their lyrics to "Almost Lover" are a perfect example of the outside-the-box-ish...
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Short Story / The Wild Winter Chords of Transatlantic Discontent
by Mikhail_S
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Short Story / A Bit of Science Fiction, Mate
by Mikhail_S
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Short Story / The Looker
by timrees
I loved this story, I wasn't sure what to make of this being read outloud to a camera, but it gave it an iteresting effect, and it also helped visualize the peice much better. I'm not sure what the point of the balaclava was if she had already seen his face and could easily identify him later, unless he planned to rape her in public which wouldn't make much sense. So maybe you could clean up a little on the messy details. Otherwise, it was a great peice.
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