mattfwilson's profile

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AGE: 22
LOC: New Fairfield, CT
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 18

Obviously I’m a writer. I’m been writing for around five and a half years now. My inspiration for writing actually came from video games at a young age. I was fascinated by the storytelling within games and decided it was something I wanted to do.

When I’m not writing casually, I’m either graphic designing for PARALLEL, a company my friends and I are building, or writing for a tech blog called Solution Watch which specializes in reviewing online web application and products.

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Version 2
20 Reviews   3 Comments
This one goes out to that big ball of fire in the sky, that star that keeps us warm and alive all the days of our lives. Yeah, I'm talking to you. Oh sun, how you have made me feel so good when I am cold. You melt away all that dreary winter snow to make way for an emerging spring. You make it pleasant to swim in the summer time. You make life on this place we call earth, possible. But then again, this piece of writing is not about how good you are to me. This is about how annoying you are wh...
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Poetry / Man Of Faith
Version 3
1 Review   0 Comments
Who's the one staring at the three enclosed walls, How come I show maturity where you show flaws, When opportunities arise, your reactions stand still, Your accomplishments lacking, regardless of your will. I've done certain things, I will always regret, Things against morals taught to us, you'll never forget, My mind was decided, but it was already done, I'm sitting here now, yet I wasn't the one. I understand now after what I've been told, You gave me my life and for that much I owe, Promis...
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Poetry / Man Of Faith
Version 2
0 Reviews   0 Comments
Who's the one staring at the three enclosed walls, How come I show maturity where you show flaws, When opportunities arise, your reactions stand still, Your accomplishments lacking, regardless of your will. I've done certain things, I will always regret, Things against morales taught to us, you'll never forget, My mind was decided, but it was already done, I'm sitting here now, yet I wasn't the one. I understand now after what I've been told, You gave me my life and for that much I owe, Promi...
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Poetry / Man Of Faith
Version 1
0 Reviews   0 Comments
Who's the one staring at the three enclosed walls, How come I show maturity where you show flaws, When opportunities arise, your reactions stand still, Your accomplishments lacking, regardless of your will. I've done certain things, I will always regret, Things against morales taught to us, you'll never forget, My mind was decided, but it was already done, I'm sitting here now, yet I wasn't the one. I understand know after what I've been told, You gave me my life and for that much I owe, Prom...
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Short Story / The Misfortune of Layla
Version 5
24 Reviews   7 Comments
A young woman stands alone in an open field. The fragrance of flowers and life radiate from her surroundings. She is a very attractive individual. Her soft facial features compliment her unique, but loving smile. The sun shines high in the sky illuminating the plain magnificently. It is silent and peaceful with nothing around to agitate the tranquility. The tall blades of grass sway in the calm wind, as if they were dancing merrily with each other. Soon however, the woman recognizes a figure ...
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Short Story / You Can Be Lawrence
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Short Story / Lucky Ones
Good story, I liked the introduction the most. Personally I think that the main body of it could use some tweaking, but overall I liked it. There were a few spelling mistakes throughout as well, but nothing major, "accedent", "resonse", "cann't". Also I kind of disagree in the some of the places where you used exclamation points, but that's just me. My friends sometimes say I sound like a robot because I don't use too much shaping punctuation or style when talking to them, but oh well. Your d...
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This was good and very eerie. I immediately thought of a horrow film as I read through it. I personally think you could expand on this a bit more to give it an even creepier feel to it. Overall though, nice piece.
Short Story / The Wait
This was pretty decent piece in my opinion. Like you stated in your Notes to Reviewers, I believe you did a nice job developing your characters in the first portion of the story, but hey, there's no one saying you can't further give them more personality and description as the story unfolds. Many people also recognize speech in actual "quotation marks" instead of 'apostrophes', but I guess it all depends on what you like. I thought you did a nice job on the mannerisms of each character when t...
Poetry / Im Searching
For such a young writer, this piece is impressive. The only thing I can suggest to you is the proper use of punctuation. Remember that "its" is different than "it's". "It's" is the same thing as saying "it is" so if the sentence you're using "its" in does not sound correct saying it the long way "it is" then you don't use a apostrophe. If the sentence does sound correct, you use the apostrophe. Just simple punctuation things like will help your poem improve. Good job though, I liked it.