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AGE: 30
LOC: Garwood, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 19

My writing tends to be very sexual.  If this bothers you then do yourself a favor and do not read it.  I feel that writing should elict emotion.  If your writing is not making your readers sad, happy, angry or disgusted.  You should stop writing.  

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Short Story / Confession
Version 1
7 Reviews   0 Comments
t. Anne’s Catholic Church 555 Second Ave Garwood, NJ 07027 Dear, Father Vincent I am responsible for the deaths of over one million Jews and undesirables. I worked for the SS during World War II. They put me in charge of a concentration camp outside of Germany. In the beginning of the cleansing we used to line them up and shoot them down. Eventually, this took a mental toll on the soldiers. That was when we started to huddle them into the showers and release the gas. When the war started I wa...
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Short Story / SOCIOPATHOLOGICAL
Version 3
17 Reviews   2 Comments
It was fifteen when I realized that I could convince or force girls to do things to me sexually. There is one situation that remains fresh in my mind and still makes me hard to this very day. Her name was Stephanie she was only twelve years old. She lived a couple blocks away from me. I took notice of Stephanie one day when I saw her walking home from a friend’s house. She was wearing this short jeans skirt and a white polo shirt. It wasn’t so much the way that Stephanie looked or even what ...
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Short Story / who needs women
Version 2
16 Reviews   2 Comments
I haven’t been on a date in the past two years. It isn’t that I don’t like sex or women actually the reason is that I enjoy sex and women to much. I am a twenty six year old man who works on Wall Street. I make six figures a year. I am relatively handsome and I keep my body in good shape. The women that I work with, proposition me to go out for drinks quite frequently. I always respectfully decline their offers. The true reason I don’t need women to satisfy my sexual urges is that I have por...
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Short Story / black out
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16 Reviews   0 Comments
I hear my cell phone ring, I wake up and look at my alarm clock it’s eight in the morning. I grab my head with my hand, I have a pounding headache. I search through a pile of dirty clothes for my cell phone. When I find it, it stops ringing. I flip it open and it says missed call. The missed call says my brother’s name, so I call him right back. My brother proceeds to tell me that I was so drunk yesterday that I must have blacked out. Out of fear of what I might have done during the black ou...
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Young Adult / Addicted
I have a degree in psychology and the characters is not you stereotypical bulimic. That is not to say that a person like your character could not exist. Having worked with the mentally ill, you find all kinds of shapes and sizes. I liked it. The story definetly range true, I guess that was why so many people thought it was really about you. What attracted me to this story was the title Addicted. I am a recovering drug addict. What we say in recovery is, "I didn't have a drug problem, I had a ...
Short Story / Daddy and the Gun
I would definetly finish it. It was good. You could use this beginning for any number of stories. Could be a flashback from a soldier in Iraq. It has alot of potentail, just work out a scenario. You seem to know the character very well. You probably have a story already in mind for it.
Short Story / The Call
You did a great gob building up suspense, if that was you intent. I would liket to see how this plays out. It was definetly a very interesting beginning. Are you planning on expanding on it?
Short Story / Free Market Man
The story was a little all over the place. How the hell does a young kid go from doing the books for the mob to attending harvard. I grew up with guys in the mafia, they aren't the most trusting bunch. They don't actually have what you would call book keepers. In the beginning the character comes across as smart, almost evil and in the end I just thought he was a jackass.
Short Story / "Death Letter"
It was unique story, I liked the twist ending. How would the husband know what the wife did to the doctors kids though. If the wife had killed everyone, only she would know hoe they died or did I read it wrong. The problem with female killers is that it is really hard for them to overpower their male victims. I assume from the first sentence that she killed the doctor. Also, if she was a woman scorned would she really allow her husband to write a note. Would he be able to if he was drugged. I...
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