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AGE: 15
LOC: Liverpool, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 22

i am 14 years old and i am a beginning writer so i would like lots of reviews so you can help me. any opinions on things you think i should change or i could fix a little will be helpful thanks

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Young Adult / a work in progress
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this is a brief description of a story i am about to write tell me what you think so far Main characters: Dwight O’ Donald- he is the main character. He is the younger twin of Matt O’ Donald. At home his parents give his older twin Matt and his older sister Morgan all of the attention and blame everything on him. He is mistreated at home so all he has to look up to his friend and brother sometimes. He has two best friends, Patrick Connors and Kayla Ellis. They all meet in 2grade and have been...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / with out you
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i dont know what i would do with out you. i dont know if i could live. your words and your advice is mainly what gets me by the day. the times when i needed you the most, you were there to comfort me in the dark corner i sat in. you took my hand and showed me to the light and with out you, i would still be sitting there in that dark corner, alone and afraid. with out you, i would be lost.
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Quotes / love
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love can be a wonderful thing and bring you the most happiness in your life but then and can bite you in the ass later and leave a nasty bruise XD
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Romance / I Think I Love You
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Every time I see you, a big round smile crosses my face. My heart gets warm and feels all bubblely inside like a valcano getting ready to burst its top. When I stare into your eyes, they are a portal that brings me to another world where nothing can go wrong and where my thoughts run wild like a young childs mind does. Filled with wonder and amazed by what they see in their thoughts. When you are troubled I always noticed, it seems as though our hearts are connected. The pressence of you arou...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Defiance-Book I-Ch. I
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Poetry / Mind, No Mind
really nice poem, it flows really good i like how it seems as if the 2 people were connected in some way good job
Novel Treatments / Future Crime Chpt 1
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / To You Travell
yes i will be there for thro all of that and always no matter wut happens betweens us, forever i will be there always no matter wut<333333333
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Saviour
wow syd like i said before u r rele good. i will be there with u and stnad in the darkness by yourside.... is the ending about casey? very good write keep up the good work. i gave u a 10=] cuz u r rele good
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