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LOC: Stockton, CA
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LAST LOGIN: April 10
LOC: Stockton, CA
GEN: Female
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Don't Hate. Appreciate this Curvy figure, Full Hips, And, Quivering Thighs. Admire my, Rosy Breasts, Pouty lips, and Curious Eyes. Love my, Midnight hair, Button nose, Bouncing puppies-in-a-sack bottom, Dancing Feet, and Everything in between. Embrace my, Intelligence, Thoughtful words, Harsh critiques, And Freudian slips Don't hate. Appreciate, Admire, Love, And Embrace me.
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Pain enshrouds my body, as I am beaten by my enemy. I try and get back up again. I try and defend myself but yet I am hit and fall again. This cycle keeps going, never ending. I wish to break free of it but I cannot. Bound forever to this fight, the fight between... Me, myself, and I.
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Death comes to me on swift wings. Taking everyone I love. It opens its hand to me, wanting to dance. I take its hand and we start to tango. For every missed step, someone is taken from me. Every good step, someone I love stays with me. Swirling and dipping is what I must do for all eternity. Never stopping or go out of step. That is the price I must pay to Dance with Death. To save my loved ones from being taken by the scythe of death. I wish to stop and take a rest but Death thinks it's not ...
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I love the way you write how people hide their true side behind a facade placed up to keep people out. I know a lot of people have done so, including myself. Using a facade leads to fake emotions and when love is fake, then the real love is shelved away. It does not make sense, I know, but I wanted to try and get the meaning you might get. I do suggest trying to capitalize your words where it is needed.
I must say your poem managed to put a smile on my face. Your words have a way of coming to life and making a mini-movie out of it. I could see the lover dancing with the gypsy around the campfire and letting their lover know they have nothing to worry about. I would love to see more of your poems and I do not know if you will continue further on this poem, but if you do, I bet it will be just as good.
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What I managed to get from the lyrics since it laid bare as to what you were talking about was a relationship that may or may not work out. If I was wrong, then I apologize, but I see there can be a few suggestions. I do not know whether you meant to or not, but there were a few spelling errors that took away from the song: 'and oft times I wonder what’s to gain.' It took me a bit to realize the 'oft' was really 'often' and then it made sense to me. I do like the style and the flow of your wr...
In my mind's eye, I could see the poem coming to life. Somehow, I put this poem of yours, to which I highly applaud you for to someone's life who is affected either directly or indirectly. The last paragraph of your poem and I quote, 'Abandoned and replaced, No longer serving a purpose for thee,In the rose’s life, Whom she loved so dear and deeply,' that just hit it home to me. There were times I was a bit confused and had to read over it, but all in all, you managed to catch my imagination w...
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