No, I haven’t had the opportunity as I’m currently working on a few other pieces. I intend to write a few more limericks to amuse myself and to divert my attention away from the material I am currently working on in those moments when I feel like slamming my head against the nearest wall. =o) Thank you for your review! =o)
Limericks / From the Emerald Isle
I once had an elegant style,
While living in Em’rald Isle.
I’d pluck four leaf clovers,
And turn them all over,
To place on my head in a pile.
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angelauddie2107 reviewed Version 1 -
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lookingbeyond reviewed Version 1 -
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very good ,, solid ryhme with clover and over ,, I thought this was very clever, you need to get a book of these together
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CreatedAMadman reviewed Version 1 -
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I like it! Fits the limerick scheme perfectly and is very warm, uplifting, and relative to Ireland.
Maud reviewed Version 1 -
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Very good for the first try. I would work a bit more on the second and last lines. Although you don’t have to follow it, the syllable count is usually supposed to be 99669 and the accent is 33223. Did think this one was cute though. Thanks for sharing.
JustGeneric reviewed Version 1 -
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I thought this flowed wonderfully and it did bring a smile to my face, though I didn’t quite understand the last line. Thanks for sharing!
Rag reviewed Version 1 -
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Pretty good first attempt – no innuendo (that’s not necessarily a bad thing) and a theme from start to finish. Have you written any more?
ScottBJohnson reviewed Version 1 -
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Very cute and fun. Technically, your limerick is 8-7-6-6-8 in syllable count and limericks are usually 9-9-6-6-9… but you seem to keep a decent meter nonetheless. Your punchline isn’t very punchy, but it is cute… so good job!
KindredSpirit reviewed Version 1 -
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Ha ha, this is so cute! I can just see it being spoken by a Leprechaun looking back on his younger days. The rhyme and meter is very good. I wouldn’t do a thing to it. Fun! Good job.
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