Haiku/Senryu / Rainball
sun tumbles
through tear in dark sky
brief rainbow
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Frogking reviewed Version 1 -
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I thought this was very clear and I can relate to the description, having seen similar visions in the sky. Perfect!
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hesir reviewed Version 1 -
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Despit or perhaps in spite of your flagrant rule bending (laughs) I liked this.
It sums up a perfect, and more often than not, private moment perfectly.
Great.
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