Romance / I love you

Sitting face-to-face with you, I see your perfect eyes shinning like stars born of the heavens’ beauty.Secret thoughts are deep enclosed in our hearts as we say the three gentle words “I love you”.We lean in closer than the leaf that caresses its twig.Your lips are as soft and delecate as those of angels, and I kiss them slowly, tenderly; giving you all my love in this passionate collide.

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August 22, 2009

Lillie_M

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304	85.9% (85 votes)	55.3%

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28	F	United Kingdom	March 07

Lillie_M reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

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August 05, 2007

robinDEredwine

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0	91.8% (98 votes)	100.0%

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44	F	Lexington, KY	December 12

robinDEredwine reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Are should be “our”.  Well…it’s pretty descriptive.  I think it could be toned down just a bit.  Otherwise, good job.

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November 18, 2006

sgracan

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58	41.7% (12 votes)	12.4%

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41	F	Canada	January 02

sgracan reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Very beautiful imagery.  You have many spelling errors which detract from the piece.  Use spell check.

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November 17, 2006

brook5593

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16	F	Nashville, TN	December 03

brook5593 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

aww that was pretty.

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