Short Story / My Special Friend
Its 12:45 am and i cant sleep,ive been tossing and turning all night..i feel so weird my body is on fire,so i got up and walked out onto the balcony.the moon instantly hypnotized my emotions . I lingered over to the lounge and sat ,when a warm settle breeze gently blew across my hot body..and forced my silk robe to open slightly..it felt as if the night was trying to seduced me. my long dark brown hair blew into the night sky in perfect harmony with the warm breeze, i was in a hypnotic state for a good minute before i noticed i was wearing only my robe.my first instinct was to cover myself and run but this strange sensation had my mind scrambled .but somehow i managed to pull my self forward and sit upfront in the lounge, when i glanced across the way and noticed a dark muscular figure glaring at me…i thought to myself how rude,this cat has some nerves watching me.but at the same time i felt enticed. as if he was #x%x$!ing me with his eye's. and as i became more and more enticed i my body seemed to develop a mind of its own,as i began to lean back against the lounge ! running my hands slowly up my thighs toward my curvy hips, I can feel his eyes following my every move.as if he was controlling my every movement with his eyes. finally my hands reached my bare juicy breast my nipples where so hard ass i caressed them with my fingers,closing my eyes imagining him caressing me and whispering sexual words into me ears as if he was trying to not only %#&$! me but my mind as well. just then the wind seemed to increase ripping open m robe completely . my eyes rolled further back into my head my hands found there way down to my hot sweet cookies..as i played with myself ..i opened my eyes to see if he was still watching.and of course he was, but now he had joined in and was caressing his manly beast. and even though we were not together i felt as if we were one…i felt his hard hot beast explore my hot warm cave as if he was a warrior on a mission…tearing through the walls.. I grasped the arm of the lounge as my body shook with excitement….and i looked over and seen him stiffen up as his head swung back…It was so intoxicating. i sat there for a minute as i came down off this exotic rush..then i sat up pulled my rob closed and looked over at the man, he was gone.so i retired to my bed and feel fast asleep.
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Well for one, you definitely need to work of punctuation and grammar. It takes away from the overall story. Also I think you need to use the words, not the cussing symbols. If your going to write this kind of story don’t be afraid to use the word ‘fuck’. After all you’re trying to show seduction in a very mature way! The only other suggestion is where you described her breasts, I wouldn’t use the word ‘juicy’. I would use silky or soft. Would like to read more.
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