Poetry / Paul and Breanna

She loves you,
She truly does.
When she’s with you,
Her face glows.

You’re the Ying to her Yang,
Her life,
And her love.
You’re a great boyfriend,
But there’s also things you don’t know.

The way you look at her blankly,
When your upset,
Kills her inside.
It’s like meeting Death himself.

She sheds a tear,
And tries to forget.
She vents with me
And stays as strong as she can get.

She wants you to be happy,
And you are to an extent.
But it seems like you aren’t getting
as far as she wants you to get.

She finds it aggravating how you ignore her.
Or how you flirt when not around.
She is sorry that she does it as well,
But your not the only cute puppy in the Dog Pound.

The greatness you make her feel,
Is a feeling she’ll never forget.
But sometimes kid,
You fill her with regret.

I’m not trying to make it all about her,
But you should know,
She doesn’t want to loose you,
She doesn’t want to let go.

I’m happy for the both of you.
Especially how it’s almost a year.
I’m just asking you not to hurt her,
Because the both of you to me are dear.

Don’t think I’m taking her side,
But I’m not taking yours either.
She is my close friend.
And her feelings are affecting her life,
She won’t put this behind.

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