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Lyrics / American Psycho

Time, it’s all me, gotta  Rolex arm.      
Got some time to kill,
and you’re just another animal.
Time is precious, how I use it means    
if I’m canonized
or just another cannibal.

You admire me, how I cut through the fast lane,
but you’re afraid I’m sure to get there first.
You lay a trap, but I’m too quick with the wheels,
and I’ll just get dirty if you do your worst.

Loathe me? Love me.

(Chorus:)
I can’t divorce myself from myself.
To hit and run is integrated with my soul.
I can’t divorce myself from myself.
Loathe me how I’m wired, but love how I roll.

Excuse me, please while I forget your name.    
My hard drive space is used
strictly for business,
and, space is precious.  How I use it means      
if I’m heaven bound,
or headed down to the abyss.

Look and weep before metal majesty,
I’m the gold, death angel born on wings of steel.
Fight or pray, it makes no difference to me.
It’s not my luxury to feel.

Loathe me? Love me.

I can’t divorce myself from myself.
To take down is integrated with my soul.
I can’t divorce myself from myself.
Loathe me how I’m wired, but love how I roll.

                 (guitar solo)
                                
I’ll take your best, what you have belongs to me.
I don’t protect, and I won’t serve.
There are no laws you’ve made   that apply to me,
I’d have you break them if there were.

Loathe me? Love me.

I can’t divorce myself from myself.
To kill is integrated      with my soul.
I can’t divorce myself from myself.
Loathe me how I’m wired, but love how I roll.

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ConfusedSongwriter avatar General Stranger

December 26, 2008

ConfusedSongwriter

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ConfusedSongwriter reviewed Version 3 - Read 100% of the Item

Wow, I really liked it. It’s has a Rage Against The Machine feel to it. I would try to have some stronger rhymes, but for this song, I think it would be better to keep it like this. Great job!

cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

April 16, 2008

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 3 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

well you followed the title very well in this lyric, nice job,,,:) i like the canibal and aninal rhyme,,very orginal,i think, “i can’t divorce myself from myself”..(or i can’t get away from myself) might make a better title , since it’s mention throughout the lyric in the chorus..(most people will think it is because of that anyway..:)...later, jim

carmenalegria avatar General Stranger

April 06, 2008

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carmenalegria reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I get it, but at the same time, I don’t. Your word choice is very vague, and often you tend to repeat yourself. This is not a bad song, just poorly written in my opinion. That is not to say I could do any better.

sadsatan avatar General Stranger

April 04, 2008

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this is pretty interesting. and i like how you got out of your writers block. lol once im stuck, thats it.

the chorus is really good.

TrevorSamuels avatar General Stranger

April 04, 2008

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Quite well written overall but I would change “Loathe me how I’m wired, but love how I roll” to “Loather how I’m wired….”

cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

March 13, 2008

cooljim102055

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

well they are random lines, i think you have a song in this though, and name it, i can’t “divorce myself from myself”, you have talent and alot of good lines but you have to focus on one thing..with that you’ll write a fine song i’m sure..jim

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