Poetry / Form of Art

If pain is the chisel of perfection
I must resemble a form of art
Not a work of art
As that would require another’s labor
No-I am a form of art
A solid piece of oak
A solid piece of stone
Chiseled

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Bendo13 avatar General Friend

February 16, 2006

Bendo13

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Yes, yes you are a work of art, the outside world and your surrounds helped chisel you into the form of art you are today.. If it’s ok that I start and fully absorb you, then I’d like to do so.. Very nice concept though.. But a peice of wood, hmm I can’t see that.. maybe polished stone.. smooth, soft, beautiful and solid.. Wood’s broken down too easily

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January 25, 2006

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I really enjoyed this piece.  However, the fifth line should begin with a capital letter unless it’s apart of your unorthodox writing style. It’s real. It’s metaphoric.  Keep your pen moving. It’s a must.

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