Thank you for your review. ”The complexity of my mind
is a kaleidoscope of colors” is why the entire poem puts colors to my moods and how the lights and darks are concurrent with my frame of mind.
Poetry / Insignia of My Psyche
The complexity of my mind
is a kaleidoscope of colors,
blending together with my moods,
melting with my personality.
In the state of darkness,
the murky browns and grays
swirl like a fog,
encroaching on solitude
Happiness explodes in a rainbow
of bright hues and illumination,
vivid and rich in their depths,
bursting forth across the vast horizon.
Anger beats in pools of red,
pulsing to a beat that pounds within.
Graphic splices slashing across the canvas.
Drums beating, pounding, with tempos rising.
Passion breathes in deep purples.
Magenta draws swords against indigo.
Saturations of sensations,
dissipating into midnight blue of release.
Serenity blossoms within orchards of green
Lime to Olive; Celadon to Sea
Flowing, drifting, soothing
Melting into a pool of contentment.
Oh spectrum of lights and shades
how you fulfill me.
Desires that form substance under your artistic palette,
absorb then scatter, reflecting my inner energies.
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Lena17 reviewed Version 1 -
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this was really really beautiful!! I loved the imagery and “colorful” depiction of emotion. a really great concept! (I could literally see all the splashes of colors in my mind, swirling and splatting to oriental string music-of all things! haha!-to form an exquisite piece of mind art).
great work! keep writing!
J
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Elithian reviewed Version 1 -
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For the stated goals you are going to have to dig deeper in my opinion. None of this captures my attention. I do not believe the imagery is well grounded resulting in a failure to connect the reader with something concrete. Someone else may be ok with this but I want more structured images and less color copouts.
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