Poetry / You make me insane

You left with my inspiration,
emptied my heart of emotion
Devastation
A place I remain in,
walking alone without destination
Hopeless misplacement
Lonliness adjacent
to the room I am chained to,
I stay to, smell you,
I wear your clothes to feel close to you
But your essence is long gone and
continues to fade
I feel nothing when I try
to connect to your brain
You’ve cut me off,
left me alone with my pain
Crypling to my body and mind
You make me insane.

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January 26, 2006

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I could really relate to what you describe.
You r simple phrases explain the soul ties you have with the individual. It reminds me of my own situation. This is what hit me: “I stay to, smell you,
I wear your clothes to feel close to you
But your essence is long gone and
continues to fade”
I would cut the title to one word though.

good job