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When it comes to body piercing, why is it that the majority of people who go for a naval piercing are exactly the people who should never be allowed to expose said body part as doing so is a blatant crime against humanity?

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August 05, 2008

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July 01, 2008

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April 25, 2008

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April 17, 2008

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Laugh out loud, I can not answer your question sadly, Do I believe it is a crime, no. But I do believe that you should think more, of why you are wanting to show it.

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April 16, 2008

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True and true. It is definitley an observation that needs to be brought to the attention of certain people. Could you also talk with those men who look like they are nine months pregnant yet insist on wearing a speedo on a public beach.

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April 16, 2008

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Yes I completely understand. Some people should not ever consider getting it done. I guess too it’s a preferance and a matter of taste. they have become increasingly popular. in fact the other day I envisioned someones granny getting one done! LOL!

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April 16, 2008

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Your observation is to the point & makes me smile. I think you could develop it into a delightful essay with only a small amount of work. Take your premise, that most pierced navels shouldn’t be shown in public & tell us exactly why.  Make us laugh out loud with this instead of merely smiling.

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April 15, 2008

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Very true and hauntingly realistic. You did a great job of emphasizing your point through your extensive vocabulary.

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April 15, 2008

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i smiled.

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April 15, 2008

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I feel like this belongs in a short book or collection of such quips.  

It’s stated so dryly, but with a very clean voice.  

The words “go for” may not fit in with the sentiment as presented so well, but hooray anyway.  More, please!  

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