Poetry / Over the Brim and Into Oblivion (Analysis)

For every beer, there are 22 cheers and the reasons are never-ending. Mine used to be reasons, but they’ve turned into “rationalizations on the rocks”. When good times turn bad, bad times always get worse, and when you think it’s the worst it never is. The dreaded kicker always hits you like the one that pushed you over the brim and into oblivion. And to think it was all going so well…These liquid spirits are haunting me and I can sense their unfinished business. There’s really no substance to these substances, but I can’t help but still believe in them.

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April 15, 2008

Melisssa

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Poetry isn’t really my thing, but this one I could understand, relate to and enjoy. I do think it could either be longer or be somehow tighter. There’s kind of a loose quality in the main idea, or maybe that’s just how it is when you’re feeling what you’re feeling here.