Romance / Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex, Sex!

Imagine man and woman, in a room, perhaps in bed, perhaps not, then imagine them doing sex, coming towards each other with amorous sensations in their loins.

GIVE ME PULITZER! I TAKE YOU DOWN IF YOU NOT GIVE IT ME! I MUCH BETTER THAN WILSON HUMMINGWAY! YOU SICK WESTERN PUPPY DOGS! I EAT YOUR SHOULDERS!

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streamwalker2001 avatar General Stranger

May 13, 2008

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streamwalker2001 reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

lol…  i think maybe you’re an acquired taste…  a taste that i’m beginning to enjoy…  

beccacarr avatar General Stranger

May 13, 2008

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This is ridiculous. Why even bother?

Howard_Bushart avatar General Stranger

May 13, 2008

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Howard_Bushart reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

Best romance I’ve read this year.  I especially liked the part about the puppy dogs.

Speedracer2009 avatar General Stranger

May 13, 2008

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Speedracer2009 reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

This has to be the worst piece of literature I have ever read.  I have never been so displeased with any type of writing in my life.

msstroda avatar General Stranger

May 11, 2008

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msstroda reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

What the hell is this??

Curtastrophe avatar General Friend

May 05, 2008

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Curtastrophe reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

Haha! What a smack at romance writers! I’m not saying it’s undeserved, but this cuts away at the romance and just focuses on the excess—Sex, sex, sex, ad naseum. I’m a supporter of sex so I’m giving you a 6 (for interaction) and a 9 (for romance). I hope this guides you towards your lofty goals.

-Curt    

polkadot_princess avatar General Stranger

May 02, 2008

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This is terrible, no grammer, no punctuation and hald of it doesnt make sense!

imnoromeo avatar General Stranger

May 02, 2008

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imnoromeo reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

mmm humm well its deff unique you may want to take this humor and put it into a story better fitting it just random lines is frankly a waste of energy but if u took this energy turned it into a characted and wrote that into a story then it would not only be funny but very entertaining