Poetry / suggest a title? (Analysis)

This could maybe use some work using metaphors instead of the actual actions. The reason I say this (and I could totally be alone in my take on this) is that the images I kept getting were of drunk people getting behind the wheel of cars. It was just a distracting factor to me and I would have couched it in other ways. However, for shock value… reality bites… it suits.  

High school? that is what this poem reminds me of high school graduation from a small town. Read a little like the back of a brat pack movie, the coming of age, out growing your current location…From your writing it seems you have more depth then you put on the page in your poem. I would like to see you explore more uncomfortable or personal topics. it is reminiscent of the song “Fast Car”.

cool stuff. its certainly a bit of abstract, like drowning butterflies with wine, which i think its abstract, thought i appreaciate it greatly. write on.

title= stoplights in reverse

The poem, to me, is about wishing for something for so long, and then, realizing when you’re about to get it…that what you had is something that’s really going to be missed.

I know you want a suggestion on what to name it, but I tend to prefer titles that either oversimply your work (one word.) or are very symbolic of what the gyst of the piece is about…nothing ever obvious. Unfortunately, I feel that only you can determine this…you or someone who knows you pretty well.

What about: bittersweet nostalgia?

well i title things according to how i think of them. like if this night happened in a month, or season, or at a special place, or on a certain memorable date i’d title it that, like “a thursday night in june” or “the road out of town”.
aside from the title, some more punctuation and stanzas would help this be more readable.