Sci Fi & Fantasy / God Behind the Firewall (Analysis)

Sounds like an interesting idea for a story. Something fresh that you can see people actually going through right now.

I think it would be an interesting read. I think the wording in the second paragraph needs to be changed, though. The “evil internet crime ring” thing seems to be too big of a plot point to have only one sentence. Doesn’t need too much more… maybe a sentence or two. One is just not enough, though.

it sounds like a good plot…  especially in this day and age where technology seem to be impinging on our humanity…  in a way, the more we depend on it, the more we fear it…  an interesting cunundrum…  i like your idea…  go for it!

This synopsis has definitely achieved its goal. I will be looking up your book on Amazon! I believe that any publishing company or agent that reads this would want to follow up on this story. Good luck!

This treatment leaves me intrigued, and with several questions.

1) Does Arun know the woman he loves from the beginning of the story, or does he find her on his quest?

2) What kind of addictions does he have to overcome? Drugs? Gambling? Gaming? Materialism?

3) Does Arun’s relationship with his mentor change over time?

4) Does Arun start out merely dissatisfied/confused about his life, or does he have flaws/weaknesses (other than the addiction) that he must confront and improve in himself? In other words, does he have a dark side?

5) Do the characters begin the story with strong spiritual beliefs?