Limericks / Ode to Carrie

there was a young lady named Carrie
whose mom was all psycho and scary
then some jealous slut saw her chance
and dumped pigs blood on her at the dance
then her evil classmates went to Hell merry

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June 25, 2008

Sharon

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May 14, 2008

easywriter57

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May 03, 2008

Maud

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I do get it, but you need to work on form. The syllable count for a limerick should be 99669. Of course you may not care if you are following the standard form for limericks and that’s okay too. Just have fun with it.