Poetry / Into a Woman (Analysis)

To give sometimes a woman must first get- I think this statement rings true.

Overall I don’t understand the message of the poem- forgiving the “murderers” and recovering from paranoia?

I found you very beautiful in words of the heart. It is very rare these days of trouble and strife. I would love to here more from you if you wish one port to another. Keep up the work it’s hot!

                                                    Williejames777

Intriguing piece, very well written, although a bit confusing for me at times.  for example i don’t quite understand the bit “How do you tell when paranoias set in/To get its chip off your shoulder?”  Otherwise, very nice, very nicely written.

This poem needs work.  The thoughts need to be clearly defined, and then rewritten into a cohesive whole.  I think though that with crafting, your major theme of “empowered woman” will emerge quite well.