Poetry / Looking For Love (Analysis)
Hysterically hunting
Freedom to be found
Infrangible infirmity
Indigenously sound
Painfully pounding
Rhythmically rapping rage
Treacherously taunting
Tumultously tapping today
Simultaneously slipping
Further than far
Repeatedly reaching
Laboriously longing for love
-Butterflyaway-
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Short and simple, yet it displays an excellent vocabulary and expresses the universal longing for love. Quite good overall.
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you did a great job with the discription but it feels like it need more the idea of having very short lines with beautiful discription is good and i wouldnt change that but it seems to lack a point and not flow like it could
I think the fact that the lines are so short with the alliteration makes it difficult to really discern the direction of the poem.
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