Poetry / Flowers In May (Analysis)
Stasis in silence -
Darkness quite clear.
Freshly pulled sex, from the Mother herself.
The scent of saccharin death—
Looms far too closely.
Invisible inhalations cause a lightheaded fit.
The spactacle of delivering external testicles,
A laughing matter.
Press lips against sullen cheekbones;
Most grateful for the gift of reproduction.
Flashes of the dying reach for you once more -
Pulling so tenderly at the senses,
Coating the world with the powder of lust—
A yellowed tincture against flushed faces.
Silently gasping at their well timed success
Just to fall fondly back into the soil.
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i really loved the lfe and livng to die in the poem there are many ideas in your work that are very well thought out i have never by any means given a review to any one elses work so i am an amateur at best but certain lines really gave me goosebumps it was very easy to visualize many of the lines i hope that my truthful review of your work is worhty of your creation have a good night and thank you for choosing me
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