Poetry / In Dreams

IN DREAMS

In dreams
I hear your sweet voice
whispering my name,
beckoning from the shadows,
murmuring words of endearment.

In dreams
I see you in the distance
waiting for me to join you,
to be gathered up in your warm embrace,
enveloped in the richness of your love.

In dreams
I give myself to you
surrendering to the force of your love,
to be swept away like a bird
caught in a storm.

But how, my love
do I lure you
from my dreams
into reality?

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Swift and to the point, though slightly cliched. Enjoyable enough ~

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