Poetry / Sacred Expression

        
His pain is only a memory;

The sorrow has all but abandoned me.

Out of the darkness my cold heart shines,

The living ones around will all but subside.

I have nowhere to be but everywhere,

I have no obligations but to be fair.

Can one subdue the letters that spell obsession?

Only by the sacred art of subtle expression.

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May 01, 2008

hatchettmanrox

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15	F	Duson, LA	August 01

hatchettmanrox reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I like this. It seems like it can apply to anyone, in any given situation.

Ari

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May 01, 2008

whitmansprotege

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whitmansprotege reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

quite touching…i like the line, I have nowhere to be but everywhere, that’s quite interesting, showing the confusion and frustration that loss and suicide can bring. Sorry about your friend.

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May 01, 2008

DorisAnneBeaulieu

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DorisAnneBeaulieu reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

That was an A+ job.
Smile,
Doris

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