Haiku/Senryu / Pallette (Analysis)
cherry blossoms curl
losing their battle to cling
paints an old man’s sky
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Great first two lines, esp. the first with its sweet sounding word choice and neat alliterative tang. I was unsure about the final line, however. I felt that one was tacked on and hangs outside the first two lines. I would suggest something that best compliments the image you have chosen. Good start though!
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