Poetry / A Womb without A View (Analysis)

The day when your 3 abortions
Will be considered murder:
Brought to you by
The moral palettes
Who like their Arabs Cajun,
And want planetary brakes
To still feminism’s squealing wheel.
Liberating a sex
That would march 40 million
Least-of-mine-munchkins to a salty grave,
Should never get out
Of patriarchy alive…

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It sounds too radical, and not very clear.

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Wow that was powerful
few words, but you chose them well
Reminds me a bit of Jim Morrison’s poetry
this one you have to read several times to try and grasp at its meaning, and that’s how I like poetry – poetry that makes you think, makes you want to see what the author meant, etc

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This is intense.
Your vocabulary in this is astounding and the poem fits together so neatly, I’m really impressed by this.
You have also chosen a hard-hitting (maybe controversial) topic to write about, I love it. Well done.

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Loc: United States
Gen: M
Last Login: May 22
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