Poetry / In My Hands (Analysis)

Deep dark fog

Rising on the shore

Its thick as cotton

Yet easy to consume me

Captured by a bottle

It causes chaos

for those who drink from the bottle

the earth quakes

the rain burns

the wind chills

but wait…

the sun is rising

the sun is bright, warm and energetic

it’s the sign of a brand-new day

the world stops to recognize the beauty of the sun

the fog breaks and goes away…

the bottle breaks into thousands of clear and blue pieces

the holders hand is cut yet knows that he will be okay

for it is a brand-new day

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May 14, 2008

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May 14, 2008

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May 05, 2008

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May 04, 2008

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