Poetry / PAUSE (Pursuing All Urgent Senses Eastward)

Thanks, Rich!
As you see, this is another part of the series I told you about.
Let me go through your comments:

“Technicolor vs. Shadowvision”: there is another piece of mine that relates to it, so I am basically referencing my own work here, which is something I like to do to give my whole body of work continuity. What I am referring to a “Technicolor dreams” or “Technicolor memories”. But I might think about changing the Shadowvision, it is an odd word anyway.

“Televised fights” refers to reality shows and watching them to feel connected to life instead of living yourself.

“phaseal”: agreed, bad word. I was trying to reference something I once heard in biology class, about the classification of pain, but I couldn’t remember or find online the correct terms I was looking for.

The chunky paragraphs I am not too happy about either, but this series allows for them, so I’ll leave them for now.

The “well” is of course the well of tears I am talking about and how once I allow myself to start crying and breaking down, there is no stopping it anymore, so I have to fight through it. Don’t think I want to eliminate the paragraph. (:

All in all this isn’t my favorite piece of the Acronym series (that may be SPRING, COD or TOP II), but it needed to be written. As did all of them.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read this!

no worries, it really was my pleasure.  will try and check out some of your others.  don’t feel you have to unlock these reviews; you can save yourself the credits.

r