Poetry / Elusive Soulmate

Lost and lonely, not really
alone, yet searching and
calling a mate to your soul;
always elusively just out of range,
hearts grasping, still reaching
yet touching as well,
eluding the ties that would bind.
still silver strings
intermingle the two;
creating a feeling of permanence
between souls.

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May 18, 2008

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I enjoyed your poem but Im not sure if I would have understood the meaning if I had not known that it was about lovers separated by time and distance. But knowing that the poem reached out to that universal feeling of waiting for destiny to unwind its course. Everyone can relate to this.

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