Poetry / brain storm (Analysis)
Brain storm….. 1.1
Barren thoughts slip through lose lip, mind flips with consequence of not one’s own.
Misguided jealousy’s breaks heart through dysfunctional shades of green and red, of things that could but not happen outside one’s bed.
Bedroom a place of unspoiled fun where relationships finish before they’ve begun, broken promises through tears of bloodshot eyes, person despised
emotional attachment is all but a task, of a one-sided conversation to a brick wall before breakfast.
Advantage’s taken but for one’s gain, for when realization has for-come there’s nothing left to hold but pain.
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