Poetry / Salvation

I’m torn between love and life,
carrying a burdan too heavy for me to hold onto much longer,
slowly I’m slipping; loosing control.

I turn anger to tears,
tryin to fight back;
to keep myself from that daring edge.

And when I can’t take it any more,
can’t stand strong anymore;
I turn to him, my love and

I find my sedation within his arms,
within his touch and kiss,
his arms around me bring me salvation;
taking away all the pain;
each waking moment washes every thing away.

No matter how cloudy the day is,
no matter how many rain drops fall,
he shines through and washes it all away.

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