Poetry / i don't know

i was asking why,
my words are not clicking right.
why, when time to write is put down by my own time.
when i feel the need to let you know how my poetry is so low.
how i’m just a lame dummy writing in weird sentences.
how my own time is wasted by my stupid rhymes.
its time for me to find a better source of inspiration than smelling weird roses which make my nose cry.

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