Poetry / Cabernet Franc (Analysis)
When I put you to my lips
I’m kissing blueberries and pomegranate.
French and delicate, sitting by the cigar box
I wonder. If you were a verb
it would be glide, you are the softening
gentle one, beseeching others
with your plum round eccentricities.
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I like it just like the other version! Either or works for me!
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Two things I really liked it because I do not like wine because I have only had boones farm! It sounds like you have good taste! Also I am originally from council bluffs IA so I gave u good marks for that too! Kepp it up! I will read them all!
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Romantic as it might be, it remains a lovely prose statement about your impressions of cabernet franc. It would need some word to become a poem.
thanks for asking me to read your work.
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