Poetry / What I'm thinking now
When will they see me?
I am not what they think
They see the cuts
but not the pain
not what’s behind them
They see the outside
You see the inside
When will they see
what I have become?
I am not what I was.
Every time you look
you see what I try to show
the side everyone sees
they don’t even try
No one cares
how I feel
how I see the world
no one but you.
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I think the title of this poem should be more “You’re The Only One That Sees”. It is a painful poem and it’s true but we both know that I know that. I think this is more about telling me how no one else sees everything that I see and you want other people to know this is a problem, Good luck, Much Love.
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Simply Amazing. I really like your sense of emotion. I can definitely tell how you are feeling through this one. Keep writing from within…..it’s those that turn out best.
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