Poetry / Happiness
Happiness comes in all shapes and sizes.
It can be found in the world somewhere;
A smile on a baby’s face or a bloom on a flower.
Happiness can be your lover’s touch or a
gentle hug,
A child’s laugh or a father’s voice;
It can be found anywhere you wish.
Happiness can be found at night.
Whether sitting outside and looking at the stars and moon,
Or being in bed with a loved one.
Happiness can even be found in the deaths
Of the closest friends or family;
It’s in the memories that we hold so dear;
That are never forgotten.
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lovely! this is a great piece about an emotion that is very universal yet so personal. kudos to you, mother. i gave u a 10 on a book of your own because well, its your book, so therefore, it rocks!
but if it was a book to be sold on the open market, at like barnes and noble, then i dunno
but its a great piece!
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this is a very sweet poem. the words are nicely used in you work. i like it very much.
what a very lovely poem, i did so much like reading this one
This piece has a very nice flow to it….kind of rhythmic. I couldn’t find any typos in it but then again I am not the best for that. I enjoyed the topic but felt it was a little sophomoric. However you were able to clearly express the idea that was at the tip of your tongue and the ball of the pen. I received a concise and blunt message which is always good unless you are looking for a little freedom for interpretations. Overall it was a decent read and I enjoyed it.
off the top of your head? just think what this will be after you work on it. there is a nice message within.
a bit repetitive with certain phrases (“it can be found”) without continuity of style. keep working on it.
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