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I always thought when people grew up that they would be a grown up; sadly no.

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Equibabe611 avatar General Stranger

October 12, 2008

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Peter Pan never wished to grow up. Just because we grow old, doesn’t mean we should grow up. We all need to preserve our inner child so that we do not lose our spirit and innocence that made us so free as children.

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August 29, 2008

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haha very true

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June 05, 2008

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Very true, I see this everyday, in myself and others

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May 22, 2008

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In the quote “I deal with men and women who behave worse then children.” The word should be “THAN” not “then” “Then” makes no sense in that context.

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May 22, 2008

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The last clause is not necessary. I get the point you’re going for, but I don’t think you hit it in the proverbial context it is placed. Maybe something like, “I always thought when people grew up they’d behave like grown up’s.” Though it reminds me of the Biblical verse “When I was a child, I acted as a child…” I don’t think it is quite as effective.

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May 21, 2008

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Don’t get it at all.  True, I guess.  Grown up should be one word or hyphenated.

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May 20, 2008

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A sad statement, but directly on target.

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May 20, 2008

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Very true.

That’s all I got, really…

Kes

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May 20, 2008

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I love this it is so true!

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May 20, 2008

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haha cute..but it could go both ways..

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