Quotes / Darkness

very good.

i like the fact that it reminds readers of the cyclical nature of our universe.

This was ok. it just seemed like a ryming excersice.lol…good work though…its simple but to the point…i wonder where you got it from or how you thoguht of it….pretty cool

cleverly written. Good work.

I liked this a lot. I like the word ‘lingers’ in here…it makes it seem to stay forever and a day, like you said. I liked the nostalgic, sad feel to this quote. Nice.

sounds sort of like you are the moon by the hush sound. good song, good quote =] more poem-like if you would add a few more lines

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May 25, 2008

by TheRavenOD

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Its the end of a poem actually, i just really liked the quote

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I like this.  Is this part of a large poem?  If so I’d like to read it!

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May 23, 2008

by TheRavenOD

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Yes, It is part of a larger one, that is posted on Urbis if you want to check it out.

May 23, 2008

by DrChaos

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Thanks, I like the larger poem as well!

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This is inspirational. To be one of my favorites I think. Good job. I’d be interested in reading the poem you wrote.
-Jane

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May 23, 2008

by TheRavenOD

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Well, it is posted on Urbis if you wanna check it out under the name of Nyx.

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both lines are contradictory. how can something linger but not stay?

I really like this quote. I would like to read the whole poem that it is taken from. It speaks to me of depression, and it’s long awaited, but sure, passing.
The only suggestion I have is possibly to change the title to something to do with depression instead of calling it Darkness.