Poetry / Purple Dream (Analysis)

Spiraling out of control

Memories flying by my eyes

Falling deeper and deeper

Into the depth past no limits

I fall into a graveyard

I see my lost love

Just standing before me

I stare into the depths of his blue- gray eyes

We fall in love all over again

Suddenly everything goes black

I get a cold sweat

Next thing I know I wake up in bed choking

Out of breath I quickly sit up

Was it all just a dream?

Or did I really see my lost love again?

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