Limericks / Owning God

Claiming that God is found in one holy book
Is the act of a selfish, closed-minded crook.
For what our God taught
Would all be for naught
If we fail to see Him wherever we look.

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June 22, 2008

Sharon

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724	88.0% (234 votes)	27.6%

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39	F	Mentor, OH	November 11

Sharon reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

It’s an excellent message. I prefer lines 1,2 and 5 to be no longer than nine syllables each, but hey, you made it work with eleven. The flow is really good and the rhyming is right on. I think the story it tells is the best of it all. Good job and good luck with it.