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Dear So and So:
“Hail – North Sphere.”
They are the dreaded words no earthling wants to hear. They are the very words they will all be forced to say if he gets his way.
Earth: With Vengeance, Till Victory is an action packed, military Sci-Fi drama set before the turn of the 3rd millennia. It is part of the Earth Trilogy. The completed 200,000 word novel is the prelude to Book Two: The Great War. The final part of the trilogy is aptly named The Master of the Machines.
The world has changed.
The Eye in the Sky supercomputer was created by mankind to control the robots. It could not. All it did was give rise to the most powerful being the Earth has ever known. The Eye in the Sky was meant to bring peace. It did not. All it did was tear the Earth into two rival parts.
And thus began the days of North Sphere and South Sphere.
Future Earth is a dangerous place. A warmongering, genius Meta-Sapien (Humanesque robot), so special that he has no Earthly name has come to power by merging his machine mind with the Eye in the Sky of North Sphere. Half the robots belong to him. Half the world belongs to him. But The Nameless One would not be who he was if he settle for anything less than everything.
To take control of the Eye in the Sky of South Sphere he has begun his crusade for the sacred Light Keys: mystical, micro-processing medallions given to privileged humans for the purpose of safeguarding the Southspherian Eye in the Sky. To acquire the Light Keys he must start the Great War, the final war. But no war on future Earth can be won without the loyalties of Prymataur, the greatest warrior of them all, King of the Ani-sapien Army, a breed of part-human, part-animal soldiers The Nameless One genetically engineered years go in order to conquer North Sphere. Standing in The Droid’s way is the one man who always seems to be his roadblock: Joseff Troy, the Supreme General of Africana, the land utopia.
The Nameless One has a plan for them all.
And so begins the Great Tale of future Earth.
With Vengeance Till Victory is the first of many novels I intend on writing. In college I was an English major before pursuing a business degree. After reading all the great robot novels I felt as if there was something missing. With Vengeance, Till Victory tries to stretch the robotics and biotech genres to the limit. Woven within the tale you will find the mightiest of machines and dazzling creatures, along with tales of redemption and personal loss, but most of all, the heartache we all drag along each day.
I’d be happy to send you a complete copy of the manuscript. Thank you for your time and expertise. I look forward to hearing from you.
Hail, North Sphere,
Amer A. Shakir SASE Enclosed.
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