Poetry / A Secret Garden of Eden (Analysis)

in the bible, in Genesis 3, during adam and eve’s time, all they could cover themselves with were fig leaves sewed into aprons so i was actually making an allusion to them, eve especially, considering that I’m a female and she being the first to fall. You can also see this from the title that i chose for the poem, considering that in the bible, they were in the garden of eden. In this land of expulsion that I mentioned, i am envisioning myself being punished,an alternate garden from which adam and eve were in, in which i am no longer allowed to be clothed (leafless) out of shame.

What i am seeing around me is a part of the place i am placed in; these include inhabitants that I imagine may not be qualified to enter God’s kingdom, those that are inobedient or in no way exhibit belief in God and his Word. This imagination comes out of fear, not with absolute certainty of who may indeed enter and who may not. I fear that I may not and use characters that I think or imagine may not be able to as well. This is what i mean by “planned wedlock”.
I actually conceived this poem by looking at someone’s artwork- he drew on about 2 walls, all over, and when seeing it, i could see myself in it, and what the images he used portrayed to me, so hence, i made a poem out of it from my perspective. Some of the images you see come from that, such as the fists punching forward, however , reviewing it i do how some images may be inconsistent with another  although i was trying to portray all the characters that i imagine and see. the “fists punching forward like the gears of Titanic” are an image that i chsoe to use to portray those who are hard-hearted, arrogant, egoistical,nowhere near humble,  so power driven that they will do anything to get in their desired position, which would be their only reward and nothing else.
I hope my above description makes clearer now what my poem means, if not, feel free to ask more questions!
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