Poetry / Where are you? (Analysis)

You love me deeply, this I know,
You nee me much more, I know this to,
I wonder through life as a child,
Who has used up all the moment had to offer,
Thinking only of the next and the next never still,

The imagination is vast, possibilities endless,
Which path will I find you upon?
What possibility played out?
How near or far will we travel?
How bright will we shine to the world?
How deep will we love?
How far will we fall to be lost?
How deep within me will you rest?

Will you look on my face to find beauty and grace?
Would you take just one look at my heart,
Then vow never to part?
Will you see how my soul shines for you?
When I look to your face, such gentle beauty and grace.

Could I touch a heart such as this?
The very heart that wields,
Such power and glory,
With effortless motion and grace

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Age: 40
Loc: United Kingdom
Gen: F
Last Login: June 02
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