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Stage Play / Welcome to London...No Scousers Allowed (Analysis)
ACT I
scene4
Sarah: By talking of papers,we saw you had THE SUN, Michelle could not believe it
Helen: I know I rarely buy it, when I do I usually leave it in the tube
Michelle: Ah…So you don’t like it either
Helen: No, you found one because I forgot to put it in the bin
Michelle: Yeah that’s where it belongs
Helen: But I kept the MIRROR, here it is
She takes the paper
Sarah:Victoria Beckham again! I just can’t stand that woman
Michelle:Do you know her?! You are always banging on about her
Sarah:Look, you can’t help but see a picture of her, I can criticise a picture I see
Helen: Why you don’t like her?
Sarah: I hate them both, I mean he is a rubbish footballer who can only plays for publicity, she just can’t live without it either. And she is so skinny it’s scary. It’s so sick to pretend to love each other when we all know he is cheating on his wife
Helen (ironic): Ok…YOU DO HATE HER
Sarah: Yeah and I can’t wait for the day the journalists found a video or a picture of him having sex with some tart.
Helen: My God you are evil
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Short but to the point. I like it so far.
London’s nice.
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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 -
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hi there,
well to be seen and signed is a very hard thing, you have to write something real special no matter what your field of writing your in,,i think this is good but not yet in that category,,but it’s just my opinion..i don’t mean to sound evil…:)..just an opinion,,but it is good though it’s not great as i mentioned,,,later, jim
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hahaha. i loved the argument over posh and becks, very cute. i found something that you might want to fix though, “he is a rubbish footballer who can only plays for publicity” should be “he is a rubbish footballer who only plays for publicity” maybe? Or something along the lines of that. I’ll definitely have to read more of this one, very cute and amusing. <3 ames plaza
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