Poetry / Indecisive (Analysis)

You drift around me
Cobalt blue skies
Indecisive
Multifarious lies
Wicked abyss
You’re my only sunshine
Take me with you
I’ll make you mine
Indecisive
Antagonizing you
You drift around me
My sky is cobalt blue
I crave you
Let me be
What do I want
Too blind to see
Gone
Without a trace
Without one last glimpse
Of your face
Cobalt blue skies
Turn to gray
Realization
Turn back time if i may
Caught in my mistake
Gray skies unwind
No more lies
I’ve made up my mind
Come back
My mind is made up true
Bring back my skies
Of cobalt blue

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