Limericks / There once was a cute girl called Jess

I couldn’t disagree with your review’s assertion that putting in more time would improve something.  Time is not the measure of success.

If you ‘see my point’, why is it that you appear to have missed the point completely?  She confessed to liking me, hence the lines, ‘she liked me but I didn’t guess’ followed by ‘she ‘fessed up one day’.

If you’re unsure of a particular word used in someone’s writing, perhaps you should look it up.  ’Wahey’ is easily found if you should happen to ‘put in the time’....

You’re review is all over the place, and appears to have been written without having put in much thought.  Sorry.

Thanks, glad you liked it.  I’m in agreement with you on your 3 points.

I appreciate your efforts, but I’m afraid to say I find your version doesn’t flow well.  L2 has too many syllables relative to L1 and L5, and L4 has too many relative to L3.

I would stick with the original.

Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.

Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.

Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.

i was attempting a limerick, one of the raunchy ones
but i cant seem to get the syllable count correct.
its annoying. i think ill stick to my novels and
short stories. =)

This is my 3rd limerick.  The first I got the rhymes but not the syllable count.  The second I got the syllable count but not the rhymes.  Finally I think I got both, although it’s not quite as funny to me as the other two.

Don’t give up, stick with it.  Especially if it is a raunchy one.  For me Limericks have to be funny, and ideally cheeky/naughty/raunchy, etc.

Haha…I know, I’m raising an eyebrow as I use that word, trust me.  Thanks for the review.