Poetry / Breathe In And Live

Breathe In And Live
By JPW

Oh Beautiful child,

Please do not fear,
The swarming panic,
When the tempest nears.
Your face too perfect
To soak with tears.
Thunder, wind, and rain
will become
The very music to your ears.
Surrounded by this bitter storm,
Though It was far too late.
This energy you created,
Is now impossible to break.

Oh beautiful child,

A helping hand you must now give.
Be the first to teach the world
How to breathe in
And live.

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